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Post  Christian Hall Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:41 pm

Our new planet, Munto Codru needs a description! I've c/p'd over and slightly edited the one that is on Wookieepedia to act as a starting point. I will be editing it extensively later on, however, I feel that this would be a good group project.

With that as the goal, we'll go about this the way it's done in SWC's descriptions forum. Copy and paste the most updated version of the description, do as much work as you're able to, and then post your finished product below. When the description is looking pretty good, I'll(or anyone who wants to) can turn it into an official suggestion.


Title: Munto Codru ID# 5928

----http://www.swcombine.com/rules/?Galaxy_Map&planetID=5928

Proposed Description wrote:
Munto Codru is a remote watery world located in the Outer Rim. It sits in the Codru system within the Pakuuni sector. Its sole sentient species is a four-armed and highly xenophobic race, remarkable for the odd dichotomy between the young and the mature Codru-Ji.

All of the planet's landmass is centered in one large super-continent. The super-continent is mostly made up of towering mountains and deciduous forests, filled with gigantic trees. The planet has a very consistent temperature year round.

The beautiful scenery and mild climate are slightly deceptive as the planet has many dangers. The xenophobic locals have many cultural features that can easily appear to be barbaric to outsiders. Outsiders who do not understand the parental relationship between the adult Codru-ji and the Wyrwulves can very quickly make enemies.

At times even the weather can turn deadly. Lightning storms are sporadic and pass quickly, but leave horrible firestorms that rage for weeks afterwards. At other times the coast of the continent is plagued by large tsunamis. Because of this, even the locals recommend being very careful about when one leaves the mountainous areas.

Deep in the mountains, past where the Codru-Ji make their homes, it's possible to find strangely designed stone castles. The Codru-Ji claim that the constructs were not built by them, but instead built by an unknown extinct civilization. The strange buildings appear to be made of some transparent rock and are decorated with mysterious symbols and arcane petroglyphs. Possibly due to the superstitious avoidance the locals have for these buildings, no attempts at translating the glyphs have been made by them.

Before its dealings with Black Bha`lir, the Codru-Ji could not afford to export many of their goods. The sluggish economy, when added to the extreme xenophobia showed by the inhabitants and the planet's remote location, caused Munto Codru to be largely ignored by the galaxy.

However as of Y14, the local race has decided it would be in their best interests to work with outsiders who want to help develop their planet, rather than wait until someone more violent comes along.


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Post  Christian Hall Sat Oct 12, 2013 8:03 pm

Next thing;

Our control of Codru gives us control of the entire sector of Pakuuni, which gives us control of Crseih.... I think....

Crseih canonically (thats a word...?) has a blackhole and crystal sun. Soooo I feel that the sun and system background need a nice custom image.

I've got a few tutorials and programs that I *think* would allow me to make a nice system background.


Example:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Smallsystem2cloud_zps56411bb8

Still not confident enough with the programs to make a sun image.... but I'll post those as I make them.
So, I'll post any images I make here, and if anyone else wants to try their hand, this is the place to post those projects.

Version 1:



Small:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Firstwaterplanet20x20_zps791b9651

Large:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Firstwaterplanet150x150_zps3ddcbb58

Super large:
https://2img.net/h/i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n514/Blazeingcxh/firstwaterplanet_zps2da7ac37.png



Version 2:

More obvious land

Small:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpangea20x20v2_zpsd783ea42

Large:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpangea150x150v21_zps29353720

Super large:
https://2img.net/h/i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n514/Blazeingcxh/planetwaterpangea_zpsde4f377c.png


Version 3:


Small:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpange20x20av3_zps984f7e1e


Large:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpange150x150av3_zpse68ce5ba

Super Large:
https://2img.net/h/i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n514/Blazeingcxh/planetwaterpangeav3_zps9d86056b.png


Version 4:


Small:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpangeav420x20_zps3cb2aff8

Large:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpangeav4150x150_zps35057236

Super Large:

https://2img.net/h/i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n514/Blazeingcxh/planetwaterpangeav4_zps668cd5b5.png



Version 5:

Small:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpangeav520x20_zpsd1c092c3


Large:
Our New Planet's description, among other things. Planetwaterpangeav5150x150_zps97d7ed66

Super Large:

https://2img.net/h/i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n514/Blazeingcxh/planetwaterpangeav5_zps22bd1d59.png


Munto (moon):

Small:

Our New Planet's description, among other things. Muntov1small_zps687aeb89

Large:

Our New Planet's description, among other things. Muntov1large_zps7477c6a5

Super Large:
https://2img.net/h/i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n514/Blazeingcxh/muntov1superlarge_zps306e90e5.png
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Post  Christian Hall Sat Jul 12, 2014 10:04 pm

Work was put into completing the system art for Codru. Now all that's left is finding a design that the majority of us can all be happy with.

So with that as the goal, we are putting the designs up for voting.


Our New Planet's description, among other things. Starfieldwip_zps3623b8d0
option 1


Our New Planet's description, among other things. Starfieldwip3_zps150ec79f
option 2.


Just post your vote below. You only get one.
Because I'm indecisive, I'll refrain from voting Razz
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Post  Laz Uli Sat Jul 12, 2014 10:06 pm

one
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Post  Lucas_Isen Sun Jul 13, 2014 12:46 am

One is pretty....are there 3 suns though?
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Post  Christian Hall Sun Jul 13, 2014 12:52 am

There is only one Sun in system. My theory was that those are just really bright stars from other systems.


I'm going to have to make an entirely separate image for the sun, and get that approved. But I'm not skilled enough for that right now.
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Post  Altra Firesong Sun Jul 13, 2014 2:16 am

one...

or maybe the planets are reflecting?
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Post  Walhabie Eotak Sun Jul 13, 2014 10:49 am

I like 3, but up for any really... nice work!
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Post  Tuffwer Sun Jul 13, 2014 12:44 pm

one
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Post  Bishop Mon Jul 14, 2014 1:28 am

I'd say one. The rays look pretty cool
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Post  Rhan Komo Wed Jul 16, 2014 5:18 am

two
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Post  Nodi Cantor Tue Jul 22, 2014 1:59 pm

I'm going to go with two
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